is this a correct sentence?
My sister is a fashion designer had her own boutique. but Now she’s come to dubai trying for fashion desining job . need to prepare a resume. Can anyone tell me if this is a correct sentence to add in her CV?
“SOLELY HANDLING THE BUSINESS OF DESIGNING AND ADMINISTRATION OF THE SELF ORIENTED BUSINESS”
She was the owner as well as working for the business like selecting fabrics sewing, Negotiating with customers and all stuffz
Can I add the below point too in the cv?
MANAGING FINANCES AND OTHER BUSINESS ACTIVITIES
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January 11, 2011 at 2:16 pm
Yea it definitely needs to be rewritten…
I’d be happy to help but i am a bit confused by the last part of “self-oriented business”…is this a self-owned business or did she work for a business? What exactly are you trying to say with “self oriented”…that doesnt make sense.
If you can “Add Details” to your question to clarify i’d be happy to rewrite your sentence.
LOLAK
January 11, 2011 at 2:29 pm
Her Managerial skills have served her well including control of Administration, Fabric selection, Design and Construction through to completion.Finances,Costing, Budgeting and Customer Liasson.
Hope this helps.Good Luck
Hmm Dubai nice.